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Currently, I am only offering outline editing. This early-stage feedback can be your greatest tool to prevent writing hazards, such as weak conflict, character inconsistencies, scene irrelevance, and more. Outlines allow you to fix story issues in short form and test big ideas to make sure your romance is set up for success…from the very beginning.

Updated 8/12/2019


What’s included in Outline Editing…

Characters

  • Likability

  • Motivation

  • Internal need

  • External goal

  • The lie characters tell themselves (what holds them back)

  • Past incident that formed their general outlook

Romance/Plot

  • Premise

  • Conflict

  • Romance beats and structure (Setup, meet-cute…)

  • Scenes and pacing

  • Logic and continuity

  • Satisfying ending

Genre

  • Tropes

  • Style and tone

  • Reader expectations